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Post by nimbusGLOW on Feb 11, 2007 12:22:19 GMT -6
TREE FLOWER
on my wandering through
thick shade of old forest
I chanced upon a flower
growing • thriving • blooming
high on its eye-level perch
rooted in the trunk
of an ancient tree
I ‘thought’ a question
to the lovely flower
of why it chose this locale
and its ‘reply’ was thus
“my friend here is my oldest
and most trusted companion •
I know I’m secure with Tree”
the tree also offered
to share a loving ‘thought’
“I still live strong as I do
for my truest friend here
in allowing me to offer shelter
is sharing its beauty with me •
showing its deep faith in me”
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Feb 11, 2007 13:05:29 GMT -6
I've re-located this piece to this new thread
for this is the very first poem I ever wrote
(Christmas 1970...14 years old)
now slightly re-formatted to my current style.
I hope it offers a deeper understanding of
God's gentleness to each one of you.
INTRICATE SYMMETRY
...
so now
pause
in silent wonder
as the
delicate flower
you behold
gracefully shares itself
...
its color
with the light
its fragrance
with the air
...
...
...
and yes
smile
in joyous delight
as if
you hear
GOD’S voice
echoing from within
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“Now Behold
The Intricate Symmetry
Of The Flower
That Is You”
...
..
.
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Post by anna on Feb 11, 2007 16:49:22 GMT -6
Beautiful, profound and delicate. Love, love, love!!!!
Blessings,
Anna
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Post by anirbas on Feb 11, 2007 22:43:56 GMT -6
TREE FLOWER
on my wandering through
thick shade of old forest
I chanced upon a flower
growing • thriving • blooming
high on its eye-level perch
rooted in the trunk
of an ancient tree
I ‘thought’ a question
to the lovely flower
of why it chose this locale
and its ‘reply’ was thus
“my friend here is my oldest
and most trusted companion •
I know I’m secure with Tree”
the tree also offered
to share a loving ‘thought’
“I still live strong as I do
for my truest friend here
in allowing me to offer shelter
is sharing its beauty with me •
showing its deep faith in me”
~nimbusGLOW.
~*~
Searching for words...I realize...
I can't put it any better than Anna, did...
Beautiful, profound and delicate...It just is...
Sabrina.
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Feb 11, 2007 23:22:56 GMT -6
Thank You
Luv~Hearts
for your compliments
and your radiance
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Post by bichsa on Feb 15, 2007 7:12:46 GMT -6
Bravo on each piece,Gods creation shown with such beauty! How could anyone create such beauty,oh but they can't it is soley for the Creator!great work!peace ,cheryl
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Mar 15, 2007 12:49:01 GMT -6
hello again
creative Cheryl
...
you're always so loving
with your replies to the rest of us...thank you.
...
and WOW...your work has been gloriously evolving
from the loveliness it expressed earlier to the brilliance it displays now
...
this site is fortunate to have you adorn it
...
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Post by soulfir3 on Mar 16, 2007 4:58:16 GMT -6
breathlessly gorgeous
makes me feel like i'm standing among the peach flowers in my great grandmother's orchard,
like i did all those years ago
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Mar 16, 2007 13:26:37 GMT -6
oh the memories of
those gorgeous blossoms
peach trees
apple trees
cherry trees
citrus trees
...
'soul~spirit'
thank you for the comparison
and the compliment
...
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