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Post by johnyamrus on Oct 13, 2006 8:14:13 GMT -6
she loves daisies
i’m not very good
at remembering that.
on those
rare occasions
when i DO
bring flowers
it’s usually
roses,
or
those 3 dollar bundles
from the market.
never daisies.
and never
at the right moment.
it’s usually
for something i did,
forgot
to do,
or
should have done.
and
when it IS
daisies…
when i’m
putting them
in a vase
and adding water,
i can’t help
thinking
about
bees.
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Post by shell on Oct 13, 2006 15:05:53 GMT -6
i so like that sparkle ... and by the way "ohhhh men!" .... and double by the way, what we do not say is indeed what we say loudest, eh? .... this is superb, i love it ... *tiptoes away*
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Post by rrw on Oct 13, 2006 23:31:53 GMT -6
Sweet, write, John. so simple and powerful.
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Post by johnyamrus on Oct 14, 2006 7:08:01 GMT -6
thanks, guys...i'm finding the older i get, the fewer and fewer words i'm using. maybe there's just less and less in my head for me to use.
john
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Post by dawness on Oct 14, 2006 11:37:41 GMT -6
teenage heart throbbing!  |
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Post by anirbas on Oct 14, 2006 23:48:57 GMT -6
Touching poeming, Yam. It's not what flower the man brings, but that he brings
anything, be it roses, three dollar bundles, or daisies, for whatever reason...
Just because, or just because...Nir.
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Post by vixen on Oct 15, 2006 9:29:44 GMT -6
Beautiful John. Vixen
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Post by johnyamrus on Oct 16, 2006 8:12:48 GMT -6
i get put down a lot by people who say my poems are about nothing...but i disagree. they're just about very tiny things that are important to me.
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Post by vixen on Oct 16, 2006 9:49:25 GMT -6
The little things in life are always the most important, example. My grandbabies's giggle, my dog sitting under her leash barking, an insesant reminder she want s a walk. Little moments are the best. Vixen
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Post by johnyamrus on Oct 16, 2006 12:23:15 GMT -6
your dog...i think one of the most relaxing and wonderful things in the world is the sound of a sleeping dog.
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Post by soulfir3 on Oct 17, 2006 4:53:03 GMT -6
wonderfully uplifting scribe, john. trully enjoyed it
~ Soul
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