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Post by anirbas on Apr 24, 2009 21:55:07 GMT -6
yo...yo....I say. YO! word up word up word up gotta keep yo' shit straight what doesn't break a woman makes a mo' fo' woman
ya see, I been to the fire danced round the mutha fucker then walked right, I say right on through it
I ain't no kittykat so doncha call me Kitten ain't wearin no white socks and not a single mitten
ya see, ya see these claws on my paws are made of titanium and steel I cutcha like a razor, bay-be stab ya, like a daggar
ain't lyin', ain't lyin', cuz I got's no need to
step back, step back 'cause I'm fixin' to make ya drop and lock them jaws!
gonna growl real low uh said, uh said, dangerous low then I'm gonna let out a roar gonna have yo' ass divin' fo the flo'
only one way to make 'dis bitch purrrrrrrrrrr you betta recognize gotta treat her right!
gotta treat her right!
gotta keep yo' word I say, I say keep yo' word; keep ya' mo'fo knife in your hand and outta my back
'cause ya see, ya see what doesn't break a woman ah say, ah say, makes a woman an' I been to the fire danced round the mother fucker then walked right through it
ah, say doncha call me Kitten I ain't no mo'fo kittykat mu' name is Empress and me, I'm a lioness
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Post by anirbas on Apr 24, 2009 21:57:16 GMT -6
someone must have recently watched Notorious...gigglegiggle...
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Post by wistfuldragon on May 5, 2009 11:45:32 GMT -6
My dear sibling you are just so awesome...I am left speechless...loved it...
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Post by anirbas on May 5, 2009 18:52:25 GMT -6
gigglegiggle...can you say, watching way to many dratted movies, here lately?
thanks for the read and comments, Mish!
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Post by anirbas on Aug 16, 2018 18:33:19 GMT -6
Bump.
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Post by darkness0within on Aug 18, 2018 11:40:53 GMT -6
Stylish and well composed write / Rap anrbas. I admire that you can do this... I don't think I could. But I might give it a try sometime just for the hell of it. Just promise you won't laugh. Anyway there is no doubt what this piece is about. Very nicely done my friend.
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Post by anirbas on Aug 18, 2018 17:03:53 GMT -6
Thank you, Darkness.
I like to stretch the rubber band in my head as far as I can. I enjoy writing in many genres. But, I'm not much into structures. Most of my junk is written in free verse. The one verse style my teachers poo-pooed in the seventies. Haha.
Romance was the one genre, I couldn't seem to nail down. Too much of a realist to be much of a romantic. Misharae taught me how to find a way I could pen romance though. Just imagine it, like I do my fantasy pieces and then write what I see. Or feel. Or whatever.
Thanks again for the read and comments, Darkness.
*And I would never laugh at another poet's efforts. I do encourage people to try genres that they aren't familiar with though. Just to flip the box over in their heads and see what spills out.*
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