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Post by DavidMc on Sept 11, 2010 13:09:20 GMT -6
I have no needs or worries
I neither work nor play
Choosing not to go but stay
Here being me
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The wind chime my temple bell this stair-well my pew
old guru puffs a cigarette
all is well all is well
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I have no position
and I hold on to it grimly
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Post by moseley on Mar 9, 2011 14:07:45 GMT -6
I hold no position and I hold onto it grimly....maybe some don't see the romantic side of that phrase, but damnit, that is really really good verse there, to me. Then, as the reader, after all, the word is a seed of meaning that we grow in ourselves as we experience something past the symbology of these letters and alphabet...For me, and maybe right now, Dave, this is the most rock ass! verse you've written... I know, I could have just said, me likey....but, that is rather lame.
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Post by DavidMc on Jun 28, 2011 21:56:48 GMT -6
Thanks John
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Post by DavidMc on Oct 11, 2011 10:50:14 GMT -6
If only I could stop saying
If only...
life would be blissfully iffy
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Post by aims on Oct 22, 2011 19:18:01 GMT -6
I like this piece David! It positively reeks of peace, quitude, of . . .stillness!
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