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Post by heartfelt7 on Feb 18, 2012 17:08:12 GMT -6
A Candle
In the stillness,
You light a candle in my mind.
But as I turn from its Light to write,
the winds of thought blow it out.
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Post by aims on Feb 18, 2012 18:01:30 GMT -6
 I love it!!!! |
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Post by heartfelt7 on Feb 18, 2012 18:32:44 GMT -6
Hey there, Aims. Thank you for your comments. What I love is your art work (and the icon). Have you ever read "A Path and a Practice" by William Martin? It has to be one of the best interpretations of Lao-tzu I have ever read. You might really like it. Thanks again.
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Post by aims on Feb 18, 2012 20:35:48 GMT -6
thanks I'll look into it!!!!!  |
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Post by moseley on Feb 19, 2012 22:19:29 GMT -6
devotion is a short man in a basketball game with giants
what we let into our minds were be our allowance and want
the candle wick then is fueled by nuance as when
the familiar crowd comes in the room grows dark
as we are sick of and silent to ourselves.
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Post by anirbas on Feb 23, 2012 1:17:38 GMT -6
Wow!Two great poems, for the price of one! Good work, Heart and John.
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