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Post by anirbas on Jun 9, 2012 20:24:23 GMT -6
This squadron of chain link fences deadly with intent blind shepherds hemming the population in
Obdurate walls of impregnable stone festooned with the sharp lace of razor wire
Vast interior halls endless with the reiterating emptiness of cold, steel bars
Merciless monotony commingled with the pissy smell of fear
Reverberating echoes of humans in the throes of nightmares or pain
Their cries, if heard, unanswered, unheeded
Searching for a spark of hope to light their individual ways back home...
What universe, this?
The barracks of the cursed and the damned-
Prison
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Post by heartfelt7 on Jun 10, 2012 9:54:09 GMT -6
Wow - Your words twist the insides to feel for the imprisoned. There is a book by Bo Lozoff called "We're All Doing Time" that might be called a spark of hope. He goes to prisons to teach meditation. The whole book is mostly letters from really tough guys who have had life changing experiences by going within. They don't even care if they're in prison anymore, because as they say "We're All Doing Time." It's really a wonderful book and this is really a wonderful poem.
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Post by anirbas on Jun 10, 2012 21:13:12 GMT -6
Thanks sincerely for your read and comments, sweet Heart. I cannot help but feel for the "population" as my twenty-five year old son is amongst them...
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Post by anirbas on Jun 2, 2014 22:38:26 GMT -6
I am most pleased to announce to my poetical friends, 'What Universe This?' is no longer a part of my small family's life. My son, Scott, came home May 1st. Can you say, Nir is one happy, happy mother? One child graduated high school last June and the other, graduated the School of Hard Knocks, this spring. LoL He is doing well. Adjusting rapidly fast. But, he always was a social little fellow. LoL He's not a lil' fellow anymore. He's a grown man of twenty seven. Wow. Am I really that old? Yeppers, I certainly am! Where did all the time go?LoL
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