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Post by moseley on Jan 28, 2013 22:55:42 GMT -6
then hope comes, and somehow
this hope becomes something past art
the one thing that makes your jaw drop
solidifies the broken heart into one piece
and this hope like a yoyo goes down
with a little pull, comes back to the hand again
and again, until, sometimes it falls
and hangs at the end of the tethered string
often tied to your middle finger
and has to be rewound,
is it what we made of this at all
is it the action we believe we have to participate
a little of the up and down, the ins and outs
forwards and backwards, to often finding ourselves
an easy two miles stepped back
driving the car in reverse while staring forward
the wall is always in the rear view
but is it there if you don't see it
our best effort is to hold the arrow and pull back
and aim right at the sun, with all our might
and let go just believing it's going to get there
on this try, this time
hope sometimes is the one thing we have left
when everything else gets lost
like breadcrumbs to leave a trail in the forest
we walked on faith into,
could have just thrown a rock through the witch's cottage
and not have to pass that test of fire
in the unforgiving oven, under some gingerbread roof
and piercing the sun with our arrow,
we break off a piece somehow to fit in our pocket
when we need it, like a candle in Hell
just something to light the way
when the darkness sets in
and the question of how we got there
matters far less
than which way is the right way out.....
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Post by heartfelt7 on Jan 29, 2013 20:30:18 GMT -6
Holy, moly, Moseley. Write a book like this okay? I want to buy it. (This is "something past art.") Exalt!
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Post by moseley on Jan 29, 2013 22:28:08 GMT -6
oh my, thank you...
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Post by aims on Jan 29, 2013 22:43:22 GMT -6
I agree with heartfelt, Exalt
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Post by anirbas on Jul 18, 2018 11:58:37 GMT -6
Bump.
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Post by anirbas on Jul 18, 2018 12:11:12 GMT -6
I cannot believe this piece slipped past me.
Typical Moseley offering that releases a deluge of metaphors and visuals that flow over the reader in waterfall fashion leaving one with the odd feeling of having been baptized in cyphers
(hands a velvet rope to the spaceman. "ground control to major tom" you need to land and come home, Jam. your light is missed shining among us, brother. right, Aims? )
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Post by aims on Jul 18, 2018 20:34:58 GMT -6
INDEED!!!!!
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Post by darkness0within on Jul 19, 2018 6:42:13 GMT -6
This is a very well crafted piece.
I think it's easy to loose your way sometimes when those important tethers of life that keep you grounded get broken.
That's my take on this.
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