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Post by heartfelt7 on May 6, 2013 9:51:12 GMT -6
Contemplating One
Mind is the time and place of diversity, billions of lives experienced differently, but the Heart is the place of oneness where the One embraces us all.
In time we begin, expand, and diminish but timeless oneness is where we finish, when mind is free to accept and embrace the reflection of God in every face.
Mind is the time and place of diversity, billions of lives experienced differently, but the Heart is the place of oneness where the One embraces us all.
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Post by DavidMc on May 6, 2013 20:55:23 GMT -6
Great awareness
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Post by anirbas on May 6, 2013 22:27:31 GMT -6
I like that you repeated the first stanza and utilized it as your third and last stanza. It opened the piece, as well as it closed the piece...I agree with David..."Great awareness"...*Exalt*
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Post by heartfelt7 on May 7, 2013 10:27:18 GMT -6
Thank you both for reading. I really appreciate your comments. I like this poem for touching on oneness, but "Still Free" for touching on duality. Most of my poetry seems to go in File 13 because of the struggle talked about in that poem. Thanks again for the exalt.
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