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Post by firestarfairy on May 14, 2013 15:11:03 GMT -6
the evil that is ripping thru my body and thru my mind.
the darkness that is setting in
how I dare to see the light
and how it burned me through and through
my heart that once beat so strong
laying dead in your hand
ripped from my chest.... nothing left.... nothing but darkness
the evil about to release upon the soul the caused
this evil within me.
The darkness has over taken me and how I crawl further in.
the lies that are here surrounding me nothing left but the darkness and the evil.
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Post by anirbas on May 31, 2013 19:31:27 GMT -6
Emotive imagery that pulls the reader through the piece. Thanks for sharing, Star! Got more?  |
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Post by moseley on Jul 9, 2013 22:21:34 GMT -6
In darkness that which must die, is reborn to see the light
and it may come in the middle of any day, but will often way late at night
or sometime in the sweet morn, between the middle of murderous want
and the shock that comes upon us all as if our soul to taunt
and never let the lecherous be, though they be multiplying like a virus
and when we have found out where they be, somewhere living inside us
we still know what they are and what we are and where the other ends
and just be assured that that other part never become friends
with the innocent part of us that remains after a battered and beaten shell
and all the darkness in the world, cannot take that to Hell...
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Post by anirbas on Jul 12, 2013 19:26:05 GMT -6
Nice offering on the theme, Moseley.  |
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Post by anirbas on Jul 16, 2013 0:05:46 GMT -6
Take that to Hell!!
And that, and that, too!
While you're at it,
take that to Hell, as well!
The baggage craves me
more than I crave it...
And honey, I ride
with a full set of luggage...
Still, I am liberating myself
from the non-essentials...
The baggage craves me
more than I crave it...
So, yes, take that to Hell.
And that, and that, too.
Don't forget the valise.
It's crammed to capacity
with yesterday's ghosts...
Be sure to grab the garment bag
on your way out the door...
Who needs a garment bag
filled to bursting
with rattling skeletons?
Take that to Hell!!
And that, and that, too!
While you're at it,
take that to Hell, as well!
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Post by firestarfairy on Apr 26, 2023 2:03:13 GMT -6
i love add ons to the poem
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Post by anirbas on May 20, 2023 16:05:11 GMT -6
I love them, and seeing the diehards still tripping the halls around here, poem dancing to the nines and then some. Lovely.
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Post by artolmaeus on Sept 6, 2023 0:49:41 GMT -6
I have a hard time paying the cost of a valise,though I wish I could steal one and get away doing so, but, even the use of the term has a great gravitas in a well written add-on, (bowing my head)Bravo, bravo Nir and oh, firestarfairy, subject matter like this is hard to weave but you are good at the loom!
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Post by anirbas on Nov 10, 2023 19:58:49 GMT -6
I love words
The more archaic
and obscure the better
How lovely how devine
these words slip
from the tongue
or drip from the pen
Only to be read
or remembered
by others like me
that might read
a dictionary
just for fun
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Post by darkness0within on Apr 23, 2024 4:08:41 GMT -6
A soul laid bare it seems... A write written from the heart Star.
It does seem sometimes that the night is never ending in these situations, but the sun will rise again and a new day will dawn.
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