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Post by anirbas on Dec 20, 2013 20:32:53 GMT -6
the uneasy air
above the bed
clouds with heavy
sheet rumpling
pillow twisting
nightmares
symbolism
reigns supreme
the mere act
of eating
an ice cream
synonymous
with committing
murder
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Post by aims on Jan 6, 2014 6:43:22 GMT -6
uuuuuw, I love it!!! EXALT!
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Post by anirbas on Jan 6, 2014 21:27:48 GMT -6
Thanks millions, lovee!!!  |
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Post by moseley on Jan 8, 2014 3:00:52 GMT -6
this did not obey the "formula" law...I mean , it could have gone predictably naughty....unless you are into the French notion of a "small death" then, well, the ice cream and murder are naughty...it is a stretch....I make such though as I have a rather concupiscient mind about words and wish to give mental birth to new words or a better language, but, I fear it is all badly scripted porn and like some personal Andy Kaufman joke, it shall go with me to the grave like the plot of "Punch Drunk Love" and Adam Sandler...
or......
I could say, "wondrous poem Nir!"...then, that is just too brief for me...as I am the guy who has tried to concatenate an eight page english paper in college as a collage of one sentence paragraphs with strategic commas and such, and win!!!! Professors, however, don't seem to enjoy my excursions "against the law"...pissers!
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Post by anirbas on Jan 11, 2014 19:02:43 GMT -6
I'm thinking, I should have chosen the word, nightmares over dreams, Moseley. IT is supposed to have an ominuous feel to it, not an erotic feel to it...hehe...
And yes, have heard of the "little death" and know what physical event it refers to...LoL...Lmao...You are to much. I like that in human beings.
Professors and pissers...Abound everywhere...
The trick is to piss on their feet
without getting your feet pissed upon...
Or some such rot...LoL...
Thanks for the laughter, mon ami.
I'm still randomly cackling.
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