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Requiem
Jul 4, 2018 21:43:08 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Jul 4, 2018 21:43:08 GMT -6
You might not know it but, you are thought of almost every day
When I see the vibrant color purple, motorcycles or dragons I always think of wistful you
If I'm writing in the middle of the night, it brings you to mind All the shenanigans we got up to at Bnet U.
Where we shored each other up poem dancing and on long heart to heart talks on the cell phone My sister from another mother, my spiritual litter sibling
Why just the other night I was reading a new poem And with every single line all I could think is how my beautiful Lady of Darkness, Misharae
Would so love this thrilling song of the sword! I wanted to call you and tell you how divine and tasty all of this new blood is. Get in here! See for yourself!
But, I can't. You aren't there, anymore. To hear or write of the cling cling clang the sound the song of the sword does bring
You might not know it but, you are thought of almost every day when I see the color purple, dragons or hear a sword singing
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Post by Deleted on Jul 4, 2018 21:59:09 GMT -6
I resonate with the idea of this poem.
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Post by darkness0within on Jul 5, 2018 6:46:06 GMT -6
With each breath you take, I live,
For I am within your heart and mind,
Each memory you hold of me sustains,
The essence of all that used to be,
There is a real and palpable sadness running through this write anirbas. I feel I might of been instrumental in part for you to write this.
Such a good write my friend.
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Requiem
Jul 5, 2018 12:02:11 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Jul 5, 2018 12:02:11 GMT -6
Thank you for your reads and comments, sweet word dancing newbies!
"I feel I might of been instrumental in part for you to write this."
Here, in this alternate universe of poetry, we call that "bemusement". The action of one poet, inspiring another, through their own work or comments.
But, yes, reading your 'The Artifact' brought Mishie close. It's the kind of piece we both loved and wrote to the best of our abilities, ourselves. Few, are called to be poets. Even fewer are called to sing the song of the sword.
A handful of us, met at Beliefnet.com in 2004 reading and writing in the site's poetry section. Aims, Phantasm, David, my dear Misharae and myself. David and I opened the doors here, in 2006. Disillusioned by the Bnet environment, as were we, some followed us here.
Misharae was with us, until she wasn't. She left us in September, three years ago.
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