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I don't want to think about him any more

I don't want to peer around the corner to peek at his handsome face.

That face is evil.

It's gotta be.

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just look at him, with that smug expression
that... smug...

but his expression isn't smug
he has a kind face
with a little bit of fear in the eyes
insecurity? maybe 

but god
what a face

how do you hate someone with a face like that
how do you hate someone with irises that stare back enchantingly through the photograph
like tiny galaxies trapped in space
with shimmering hair like a sailor's best nightmare, 
flowing in the waters as the siren calls you deeper into the ocean

how can you be mad when you're still wearing rosy glasses 
and all you can see is the beauty in the world?

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see! I told you he was evil
see, he's got me all enchanted 
he roped me in and i fell into the ocean
i'd have swum to the bottom if it meant we could be together.
even
though
that'd
kill
me

if only i was a mermaid, then i wouldn't have to drown
i could just swim along with him, and everything would be fine
even though i know life's way more complicated than that
who cares, right? i'm talking about mermaids anyway
can't get much more fantastical than that

but whatever, right
i'm not missing out on much
he sucked anyway- yeah 
he was mean and nasty.
sirens don't belong with mermaids.
not at all. 
cause i'm good, and he's
evil

i won't miss that-- beautiful face
i won't miss the songs he sang 
this is all a metaphor anyway
he doesn't understand metaphors
none of them do. 

so it's a darn good thing this isn't for him cause
if it was, he'd probably misinterpret it or 
something

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the end (?)

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and yes the title is very deliberate i'll have you know i typed and retyped and rearranged it until it was perfect

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Jul 9, 2018 19:35:28 GMT -6 @nolongerthan20charas said:

and yes the title is very deliberate i'll have you know i typed and retyped and rearranged it until it was perfect

i don't have anything better to do with my time

[anirbas]

Don't want to say to much and interrupt the flow. But, I am enjoying this read.
The coy "is this the end or the beginning twist at the end", perfection.

[darkness0within]

Interesting title... an acronym?


What I find with your writes is that you hook the reader into the piece very easily, which is quite clever in my opinion. 

And this is no exception... Nicely done Kitten.

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Jul 9, 2018 23:05:09 GMT -6 darkness0within said:

Interesting title... an acronym?

Nope, no literal meaning. It's still relatively random. I wanted a balance between randomness and precision that I felt best represented my abstract thoughts and feelings.

Where the semicolon was placed; what letter the jumble started out with (more important than you might think); what letters were in there (Middle row of the keyboard, minus the letter a.)  were very intentional, but it's still just a jumble of letters.

What I find with your writes is that you hook the reader into the piece very easily, which is quite clever in my opinion.

And this is no exception... Nicely done Kitten.

Thank you

[anirbas]

'hdsjklfdg;djkhsf'

I curse so much I thought it was textspeak:

helldamnshitjustkiddinglaughingfuckinggood;damnjustkiddinghellshitfuck

Someone needs to stop cursing. Never!

And you're welcome. I love reading your poetical offerings. Got more?