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Post by aims on Jul 14, 2018 21:43:03 GMT -6
You never need to impress me. . . because I was impressed the first moment I laid eyes on you!!! It's not that I am so lovesick that in my eyes you can do no wrong, It's that I love you the way I want to be loved Wholistically . . . (intentional mispelling seems to convey my meaning better IMHO) so, not inspite of your flaws but loving you totally every lovely shining quality and every nuanced shadow that accentuates that makes you accessible, relateable, reacheable, Human, able to connect with your fellow beautifully flawed gems.
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Post by darkness0within on Jul 17, 2018 6:58:43 GMT -6
It's the little flaws that attract more I feel... lets face it none of us are perfect.
Good write aimes!
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Post by aims on Jul 17, 2018 22:20:04 GMT -6
Thank You darkness
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Post by anirbas on Jul 18, 2018 10:22:25 GMT -6
Wholistically . . . (intentional mispelling seems to convey my meaning better IMHO)
I've always, thought poets are allowed to create words to fit a piece as needed. Think of Shakespeare and all of the words and phrases he alone created that became a part of the English language.
Romantic, endearing piece.
*but, you made me laugh, too, with your usage of IMHO aka imho in the poem. I was using the acronym somewhere else on the ethernet, and someone spoke up and asked me why I kept calling myself a ho???*
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