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Post by silver on Sept 24, 2018 20:04:52 GMT -6
My reaction to you ignites my curiosity I wonder what sort of charisma is it that you are exuding? Perhaps, you're an unidentified alien?
Distance is what should be kept from a being such as yourself...Strange thoughts drift through the head when you enter the vicinity and appear in the sight line
For instance, sometimes I get the eerie urge to get in the kitchen and cook you up a batch of Southern fried chicken
What the hell is up with that? What weird voodoo charm are you wearing, Mr. Man?
I believe I need to find the anti-dote
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Post by darkness0within on Sept 26, 2018 6:40:26 GMT -6
It's funny what people pick up about others... That certain vibe that is almost impossible to quantify, but it's there. Sometimes that vibe has a danger sign attached, and then for some it excites the senses.
As always well written Silver.
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Post by silver on Sept 27, 2018 12:13:24 GMT -6
Sometimes funnier the energy of our reaction to our attraction to others, for whatever reasons. I like to find odd angles to any given subject, sight in on that, and see what I see from that perspective. In reality, my initial attraction to anyone elicits in me the response to turn around and run. So, I used that as the tone of the poem. But, I wanted my subject to realize she was attracted for an odd, humorous reason. She sees the guy and suddenly gets the urge to cook him dinner! What the hell??? Satan, get thee behind me! Hehehe. And all that rot. As always, thank you for your read and comments, Darkness.
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Anti-dote
Oct 28, 2021 20:41:08 GMT -6
via mobile
Post by anirbas on Oct 28, 2021 20:41:08 GMT -6
Bump.
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