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Post by anirbas on Jan 4, 2019 0:28:21 GMT -6
Could I be anymore obvious? Could you be anymore oblivious?
Frankly this scene would be quite hilarious. If this fierce longing weren't so atrocious.
I must admit this now. I have a bone to pick with you. I'd like to know exactly how you do the things you do.
What snare did you use? What net did you choose? That dredged Passion from the bottom of the ocean that is this woman?
Should have left that sleeping siren alone where I had her safely contained- in a three lock box tossed far out and deep into Davy Jones locker.
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Post by darkness0within on Jan 5, 2019 9:33:52 GMT -6
In passion, as in love, sometimes you can run, but not hide.
If the key fits the lock it's set free.
Good bit of writing anirbas.
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Post by phantasm on Jan 20, 2019 17:13:22 GMT -6
I just saw this now, Nir. Not bad.
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Post by anirbas on Feb 7, 2019 18:01:29 GMT -6
Thanks for your reads and comments, Darkness and Phantasm.
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