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Post by artolmaeus on Oct 25, 2022 19:37:56 GMT -6
into the light, I hold my form and walk slowly letting every limb bend and feeling my weight shift on each foot light to the earth and there, the bent tall grass leans gives history to the wind's last direction as I walk into the sun, in abandon, at least without having the mind need work but the eyes to watch to see as I smell the vapor of a small gurgling spring carry the essence of the forest in a welcome air I spy the dry reeds at the water's edge once many, now gone, only the obdurate remnant of what ended and will go away in short time as I lie down on a bed of bended weeds and look up at a sky that is willing to be the canvas of my imagination and the world of my whimsy
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Post by anirbas on Dec 26, 2022 22:22:07 GMT -6
Seja bem-vindo!
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Post by anirbas on Dec 26, 2022 22:22:54 GMT -6
And, the poem is lovely, as well. Thanks for sharing, Jams!
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Post by artolmaeus on Jan 18, 2023 20:23:04 GMT -6
obrigado Nir!!
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Post by artolmaeus on Jan 18, 2023 20:24:15 GMT -6
I ran a poem I wrote on here through chatgpt, challenged it in several ways, critique, rewrite and so forth, dear heavens, that thing is beyond!!!
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