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Post by glenn on Sept 26, 2006 10:15:33 GMT -6
a rusted iron fence wrought with leaf and vine and trimmed in razor wire encloses a small garden at the uneasy heart of the city where few outside the homeless pause to peer inside
in the quiet dark of night entering by a hidden gate a lone figure comes to stiffly sit upon a concrete bench between riven, twisted trees bathed in the lurid light of a single neon globe his face downcast he mumbles a broken prayer:
O mighty God! I fear your wrath my lips are soiled by words unclean and vain in fear I watch as the world is laid to waste by greed and apathy the wealthy live like kings in palaces they dwell and dress in finest linens while all around the lions roar and beggars’ tinkling cymbals ring
O God, I am a man of empty deeds and lost I call to thee, O mighty God I praise thee and exalt thee this world is but a passing stage all that rises must someday fall and unto the radiance of thy grace all weeping faces must someday turn and in the victory of thy coming all death must pass away
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Post by DavidMc on Sept 27, 2006 0:06:37 GMT -6
This is a beautifuly expressed piece Glenn.. Thanks for sharing it. David
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Post by bichsa on Sept 27, 2006 6:55:07 GMT -6
Amen!that was beautifully, written and a lessoned to be learned,well,well done,much peace to you ,cheryl
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Post by dawness on Oct 3, 2006 1:59:21 GMT -6
such a comforting, longing gift. thanks !
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Post by Sam on Oct 17, 2006 15:36:23 GMT -6
Beautiful!!!!! Sam
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Post by dawness on Oct 18, 2006 4:31:59 GMT -6
when time whispers for us to sleep, weary or silenced, longing and belonging we are more grateful for all that was given by You... in blessed cradles of your hands
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Post by anirbas on Oct 19, 2006 20:40:37 GMT -6
That's a *WHEW* poem, if ever I saw one, Glenn...First two stanzas, almost hypnotic with the concrete images of nature and the city... last two stanzas, equally hypnotic with abstract spiritual thoughts only a human could write...Well done, earthling...Beautiful, flowing writing...Got more? Sabrina
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Post by glenn on Oct 20, 2006 14:18:57 GMT -6
Thanks, Sabrina.
Don't know if I have more. Sometimes I just feel totally tapped out.
Don't even know how I feel about this poem anymore. I was sort of reading Isaiah's "Woe is me! I am lost, for I am a man of unclean lips...," and tried working it into a sort of modern day context.
Some days I wonder why I even try to do these things.
Sigh.
I think I am in one of those "put one foot in front of the other, and stop thinking so much" periods.
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Post by Sam on Oct 20, 2006 14:46:21 GMT -6
We all do that!! Some (like me) more than others........I am enjoying myself today just reading some of the wonderful poems in here I have not had time to read before!! (Fall Break here on campus)
I am ready for the weekend!!!! Yeah!!!
Happy Friday!!
Sam
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Post by soulfir3 on Oct 20, 2006 15:04:06 GMT -6
Had me from beginning to end.. gorgeously written.
Bravo!! x Soul
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Post by bichsa on Mar 8, 2007 7:35:15 GMT -6
I was strolling along in this thread and reread this wonderful piece ,it deserves a revisit,peace ,C
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