Candle In The Wind

[soulfir3]

candle in the wind,
my only sign of hope,
as it wraps around the
unfaltering flame,
it brightens into darkest orange
and rebounds, in contrast
with the darkness,
I continually find
my light, upon the window sill
where lay my hopes and dreams
where, I talk to my angel
who was taken, without time
for those unspoken things

candle in the wind,
I watch it dip and fade
dance with such ease and desire
of unspoken faith
listening in the silence,
I can hear the voice of my angel..
softly speak and sing
in the darkness that follows,
I am no longer afraid
as the candle,
softly lights a passage,
in the gentle sung breeze

[anirbas]

*whispers*
beautiful cathedralic feeling to this poem...overflowing with spirituality...

[soulfir3]

Many thanks Nir, I do believe I had my eldest son sitting near me when I wrote this piece ( he passed away in '99 ). Seems too inspire me in different levels when he is about.

Soul

[poeticbytes]

Hi Soul
Was toched by your work and your loss,it must be very hard at times.
May all your candles shine like becons of hope, love, and assurance that we all
are intertwined energy there to draw upon for strength and well being.
Peace
PB

[bichsa]

beautiful ,and gentle .
You could feel the love in this piece.
may you always find comfort with his memory of that day.
loved it as always great write.Peace C.