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Post by roadrunner3 on Jun 17, 2007 4:27:22 GMT -6
In the dark, deep depths the mystery lay, Cold, foreboding, murky surrounds, Time suspended, awaiting the day Of clarion call and hammering sounds. Quietly still, eternally shrouded, The hope of all invisibly kept, While up on the surface, eternally clouded, In living and dying the days are swept. On a mournful day, on a lonely hill, One day the hammering sounds are heard, The waters stir and send a chill Through souls awaiting, long interred. Then brilliant light the waters clear So mystery no longer hides, In clarity now shouts of cheer As souls embrace the cleansing tide.
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Post by anirbas on Jun 17, 2007 4:29:58 GMT -6
Hail and welcome to our alternate universe of poetry, Roadrunner.
Nice offering...Chimes with ryhmes and lyrical flow...
Nir.
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Post by roadrunner3 on Jun 17, 2007 6:57:26 GMT -6
Thanks Nir. When I get inspired to write a poem I automatically think in a rhymey chimey fashion, probably a holdover from what I learned in grade school. I admire those who can say the same thing, more profoundly, with scant words. RR3
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Post by DavidMc on Jun 17, 2007 9:30:27 GMT -6
An enjoyable read RR3 ... welcome to the site David
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